This seems like a post about vocab rather than book notes. If that's the case, you could have added some more definitions in here. Your revisions of your prompts were so great and I feel that your synthesis of class material was a little rushed. I'd add a little more to these if you can find the time!
I'm glad you remembered all of these terms! It was a review for me, since I cannot retain any vocab words for more than a day...ever. Anyway, like Reina said, adding more to this would have helped. I'm sure you got all gitty towards finishing your posts but these responses are just as important!
I agree with your peer reviewers. I DO always tell you guys to only write what's useful to you, but "villanelle" with no definition? "Enjambment" misspelled? "Dying" as the definition of "elegy"? Misinformation and partial information isn't exactly "useful."
This seems like a post about vocab rather than book notes. If that's the case, you could have added some more definitions in here. Your revisions of your prompts were so great and I feel that your synthesis of class material was a little rushed. I'd add a little more to these if you can find the time!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you remembered all of these terms! It was a review for me, since I cannot retain any vocab words for more than a day...ever. Anyway, like Reina said, adding more to this would have helped. I'm sure you got all gitty towards finishing your posts but these responses are just as important!
ReplyDeleteI agree with your peer reviewers. I DO always tell you guys to only write what's useful to you, but "villanelle" with no definition? "Enjambment" misspelled? "Dying" as the definition of "elegy"? Misinformation and partial information isn't exactly "useful."
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